- Person: Emma Fukar
- Purpose: Increases hair strength and makes your hair smooth & silky
- Target Audience: Teenage Girls and above
- Why Effective?: Because it shows the lady doing karate with a man, then the man grabs her hair and slips through, this indicates that DJ Wills Shampoo makes your hair smooth. Then laser beams pop up from everywhere and traps the woman. She then smashes her hair against the beams and they all then she grabs her hair and gives it a pull and she opens her hand to show that no hair fell from her head. These two actions represent that it increases hair strength.
Showing posts with label English. Show all posts
Showing posts with label English. Show all posts
Monday, May 31, 2010
Video Advertising
Sunday, May 23, 2010
Target Audience: Children from 9yrs.-11yrs.old
1. Symbolism: The ad is trying to say that some children may want toys and e.t.c, but others just want a roof above their head. I think that Covenant House is like an orphanage that house children from the street, making them happy.
2. Body Language: I think the message in the ad should be big and it should have a contrast to catch your eye before you look at the picture
3. Camera Angle: The picture is taken from the side and shows the full picture
4. Special Effects: The house in the back looks old and abandoned, which means that this place is a run down area. Any type of metal you see is rusted. It looks kind of dark so I think the picture is in an alley way. Since the alley way is dark, rusted metal,unclean.I think he's not the only child who needs a shelter.
5. Lighting and Color: The part where the message is dark in the background, while the message is in light colors. Above the message part there is not much of contrast. Except the box is bright while surrounding the box there is a dark background. So the 2 things that will catch the person's eye, will be the message and the main picture.
6. Beauty and Standing: I think this part in the deconstruction of an ad would be the hardest part. I couldn't really find some thing in the ad for this part.
7. Target and Graphics: The ad is trying to say that some children may want toys and e.t.c, but others just want a roof above their head. I also think that the ad is trying to make kids to stop being greedy about things they want, instead they should feel affectionate for the kids on the road who don't have as much as other rich kids.
Tuesday, May 18, 2010
My advertisment
Targeting Audience: Teenagers to adults aging from 13-50+ for people who play lots of sports this is meant for you!
Tired after playing a sport?
Tired after playing a sport?
Sweating.
Smelling.
Well slip on our new Com: Fit shirt to make you feel cool on the inside as you feel on the out. Our revolutionary technology is the reason why it's so EXTRAORDINARY.
So hurry these shirts will go out fast, the first 10 people at our F.I.T stores to purchase the shirts will get it at a premium price.
BE COOL IN AND OUT!!!
Monday, May 10, 2010
Summary of "The Giver" by Lois Lowry
Communities, each community there are strict rules, like language. Jonas feels apprehensive of ceremony of 12 saying this at dinner table.
Thursday, February 4, 2010
10 Vocab Words
1. Cask- A wooden barrel to store drinks, often there is a tap at the bottom so you can remove the drinks
2. Cynical- Whining, complaining all the time, has a negative attitude
3.Provisions- Supplies or materials you need for an occasion, mostly about food
4.Subvert- Trying to ruin an expedition without anyone noticing.
5. Accumalate- To collect more and more items
6. Congregate- When people or animals gather at the same place
7. Ominous- A signal when something happens
8. Contradict- To talk back against someone
9. Adversary- To disagrree against someone, to go against
10. Flabbergast - Celebration, Jubilation
2. Cynical- Whining, complaining all the time, has a negative attitude
3.Provisions- Supplies or materials you need for an occasion, mostly about food
4.Subvert- Trying to ruin an expedition without anyone noticing.
5. Accumalate- To collect more and more items
6. Congregate- When people or animals gather at the same place
7. Ominous- A signal when something happens
8. Contradict- To talk back against someone
9. Adversary- To disagrree against someone, to go against
10. Flabbergast - Celebration, Jubilation
Thursday, December 10, 2009
Wednesday, December 2, 2009
Monday, November 2, 2009
The Acrobats by Shel Silverstein
This a little video about me reading a poem out loud, titled "The Acrobats" by Shel Silverstein. HOPE YOU ENJOY!!!
Wednesday, October 28, 2009
Personal Narrative: The First Time I Sang Infront of an Audience

There I was singing in front of a big audience all eyes on me. I was nervous, but everyone was clapping to a slow beat making me get more and more confident singing on stage. My heart was beating so fast that my chest was aching while I was singing. I was on a medium level of confidence bearing a timid smile. Now I was just below the “Level Fully Confident.” My timid and shy smile was growing bigger and before you knew it I was FULLY CONFIDENT. Finally I finished singing my song that I had been practicing for months. The whole audience was clapping so loud you could even hear it outside of school. I felt so happy and proud that I sang my song with no errors. I was singing a song called, “Country Roads” by John Denver. This was my first time singing a solo I was only 7 years old, in 2nd grade. The performance was called the “Talent Show” I took part in the auditions at school in the theater.
My parents congratulated me. A few of my friends also congratulated me when they watched me in the “Talent Show.” We ended the exciting day by having dinner in mall “Plaza Senayan” at a Chinese restaurant. On Monday my teacher Mrs. Wolf made a certificate just for me, for singing at the “Talent Show.” At school all the teachers congratulated me and, my classmates and friends congratulated me too!
When I got home I told my mom and dad that all the teachers congratulated me.
I found two presents on my bed, they were two toy cars!!! After my first talent show I decided to do the talent show for three more years before I had to move to middle school.
I will still remember the day when I was singing in front of an audience and I was so nervous!
Monday, October 26, 2009
Interview of Harry Potter
This is a little video I have made about me interviewing Harry Potter. There are a little mistakes in this video, sorry for the inconvenience!
Enjoy Watching!!!
Enjoy Watching!!!
Friday, October 16, 2009
Another Earthquake AGAIN???
I was strumming my guitar at guitar class in Pondok Indah Mall when I suddenly felt myself shaking! At first I was confused then I realized it was an EARTHQUAKE!!! Everyone was running down the escalators, next I met my mom, who told me to go to the main entrance at Pondok Indah Mall with my maid as we were descending down the stairs at top speed, I heard babies crying and people panicking. Once we were at the entrance, my mom had to pick up my sister who was at a birthday party on the last floor!!!!!!!
After 5 nail biting and anxious minutes I found my mom at the main entrance with my sister. Next I gave a sigh of relief and made our way back home on our car. And that was the end of one of my most frightening experiences!!! On one of my older posts I said that BBC and CNN predicted there would be another earthquake. Well their hypothesis was correct!!
I HOPE THERE WILL BE NO MORE EARTHQUAKES!!!
Tuesday, October 13, 2009
Vocabulary Word Definitions
1. Seizure- A seizure is when a muscle contracts and stiffens.
2. Venture- A journey or a trip.
3. Illuminating-To light up.
4. Virility-Muscle Man
5. Jittering-Extremely nervous
6. Trepidation-1.Fear, Alarm
-2.Trembling, Quivering
7. Knead-Massage dough by hand
8. Swarming-A big group in a cluster
9. Hispanic- A person who is Spanish an have lived in Spain, or a person from South America.
10.A person holds their nose up high and is very proud.
Thursday, October 1, 2009
10 Sentences Using our Vocabulary Words
1. The famous Ventriloquist performed in the Fine Arts Theater
2. The terrorist had done a very malicious act by destroying the W.T.C (World Trade Center)
3. My Mom had to bellow to stop my sister and me from fighting with each other.
4. Every human being who lives on earth is mortal, no one who lives on earth is immortal.
5. The Burj Dubai is an overwhelming man made structure.
6. Spilling the drink on my T-shirt was a blunder I shouldn't have done.
7. I was idly waiting at the airport for the plane to land.
8. Alegebra and Intergers are quite perplexing math topics.
9. The flood flowed rampantly in Taiwan.
10. In the book Eragon the Hadaraac Dessert is a very vast and empty desert with no water and no food.
2. The terrorist had done a very malicious act by destroying the W.T.C (World Trade Center)
3. My Mom had to bellow to stop my sister and me from fighting with each other.
4. Every human being who lives on earth is mortal, no one who lives on earth is immortal.
5. The Burj Dubai is an overwhelming man made structure.
6. Spilling the drink on my T-shirt was a blunder I shouldn't have done.
7. I was idly waiting at the airport for the plane to land.
8. Alegebra and Intergers are quite perplexing math topics.
9. The flood flowed rampantly in Taiwan.
10. In the book Eragon the Hadaraac Dessert is a very vast and empty desert with no water and no food.
Tuesday, September 29, 2009
6 Sentences using: I and Me
1. Stuart and I are both listening buddies in English and Social Studies.
2. Madhav and I have known each other since 2nd grade in Pattimura.
3. Ivan,Madahav,Stuart and I were all in J.I.S Pattimura last year in 5th grade.
4. My friend Tarun and I like to play with the yo-yo.
5. My sister, Danielle and I have different interests.
6. Madahav and I come from India
2. Madhav and I have known each other since 2nd grade in Pattimura.
3. Ivan,Madahav,Stuart and I were all in J.I.S Pattimura last year in 5th grade.
4. My friend Tarun and I like to play with the yo-yo.
5. My sister, Danielle and I have different interests.
6. Madahav and I come from India
Tuesday, August 25, 2009
My Favourite Author is... J.K ROWLING!!

As you know everybody knows the famous J.K Rowling who has written the awesome Harry Potter series. J.K ( Joanne Kathleen) Rowling was born in July 1965 at Yate General Hospital in England and grew up in Cheepstow,Gwent. J.K Rowling was inspired of the idea of the Hogwarts Express leaving from King's Cross Station( which is a real train station in London) when her train was delayed. If you have read the Harry Potter series there's a thunder bolt scar on his forehead, so why was it a scar on his forehead? Well because when J.K Rowling was young she and her sister got into BIG fights one day J.K Rowling through a battery at her sister and now there is a scar above her left eye. Their were lots of neighbors near J.K Rowling's there was a sister and a brother who's surname is "Potter", the brother's name was Harry and his mother told the press that Harry and J.K Rowling used to dress up as witches or wizards.
J.K Rowling started writing the H.P series during a delayed Manchester to London King's Cross train journey and during the next five years, outlined the plots and started on the first novel. After a few months J.K Rowling gave birth to a daughter named Jessica then Harry Potter and The Philosopher's Stone was published in June 1997.
The Website I referred to was: J.K Rowling's homepage http://www.jkrowling.com/





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