RICHARD TULLOCH
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I have just finished a book titled Weird Stuff it's a really good book and I recommend it to anyone. It's about a boy named Brian Hobble and he has a brother named Matthew. One day in English Class a visiting author has come to their school, the author's name is Lancelot Cummins he's written many books and comics about aliens,zombies and monsters!! All the boys in his class including Brian read his books. Lancelot Cummins asks everyone to write a simple story, but Brian's pen is out of ink so he asks Nathan Lumsdyke( the class nerd) lends Brian an easyflow pen once the pen made contact with the paper Brian started writing, once time was up he checked how many pages he filled up... 4 PAGES!!! he read what he wrote it was like the pen was in control of his brain and the story he wrote was an embarrassing love story, the same thing happens in a science test too!!! He also has a major crush on this girl named Cassie Wyman she was impressed with Brian's work and they talked to each other more often and shared their stories. While the other boys make fun of him
Brian also likes to play sports too... soccer and cricket. When Brian was playing the semi-final soccer game the score was a tie 0-0. In the last few minutes of the match Brian had the ball he was running to the goal Kelvin Moray( Brian's worst enemy) was saying "pass the ball to me BRIAN"! But Brian wanted to score the winning goal but he tripped and fell down on the grass. The referee blew his whistle for Brian to take the penalty! This was it, if Brian scored they would be in the FINALS! Brian kicked the and went into the goal!! Brian had scored the Winning GOAL!!. Everyone was celebrating and cheering!!
There's also a sequel to this book the next book is titled... Freaky Stuff!!!
*****
I have just finished a book titled Weird Stuff it's a really good book and I recommend it to anyone. It's about a boy named Brian Hobble and he has a brother named Matthew. One day in English Class a visiting author has come to their school, the author's name is Lancelot Cummins he's written many books and comics about aliens,zombies and monsters!! All the boys in his class including Brian read his books. Lancelot Cummins asks everyone to write a simple story, but Brian's pen is out of ink so he asks Nathan Lumsdyke( the class nerd) lends Brian an easyflow pen once the pen made contact with the paper Brian started writing, once time was up he checked how many pages he filled up... 4 PAGES!!! he read what he wrote it was like the pen was in control of his brain and the story he wrote was an embarrassing love story, the same thing happens in a science test too!!! He also has a major crush on this girl named Cassie Wyman she was impressed with Brian's work and they talked to each other more often and shared their stories. While the other boys make fun of him
Brian also likes to play sports too... soccer and cricket. When Brian was playing the semi-final soccer game the score was a tie 0-0. In the last few minutes of the match Brian had the ball he was running to the goal Kelvin Moray( Brian's worst enemy) was saying "pass the ball to me BRIAN"! But Brian wanted to score the winning goal but he tripped and fell down on the grass. The referee blew his whistle for Brian to take the penalty! This was it, if Brian scored they would be in the FINALS! Brian kicked the and went into the goal!! Brian had scored the Winning GOAL!!. Everyone was celebrating and cheering!!
There's also a sequel to this book the next book is titled... Freaky Stuff!!!
2 comments:
I like your posting, but you didn't really have to summarize the whole story. Also you had to write about your best part. Besides that, I think it's great. :D
I like the ease RT can take a character like Brian and make him seem like a loser in some ways, then make him the hero in the end.
...and how about that pen and what it did to the coach? :-)
Try to spend some time on a best part if you can, Brandon.
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